@ Sanam,

I Greet you in Islamic Way: Asalam-o-Alikum

Never explain "Status or Status of Women in Islam" in Beginning. It is the one of the biggest blunder student usually do. Always persuasively start your essay with some philosophic approach or talk general.

Example: KERRY-LUGAR BILL

WRONG: Richard lugar and John kerry are the co-authors of Kerry-Lugar Bill.
Correct: KLB becomes the nose for the news for every news agency.

You can confirm this from any good English professor, that never start essay explaining the words of the essay.

Regards,

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