@theelegant444

Please try to read passage at least twice. First look should be a fast one to grip the main idea, while second one should be bit slower to understand details.

Some observations:

1. You said "The new disclosures of science, psychology and their numerous experts, had collectively accepted the Darwin’s theory of evolution as a last decision, who laid its foundation on material not on culture." While passage goes "Most of the scientists and psychologists have accepted Darwin’s theory of evolution ".

There is a way difference in both statements, because passage indicates difference of opinions and your precis says that there is no such difference by making all the scientists and psychologists to collectively accept the darwin's concept.

2. Passage says "The psychologist, on the other hand, in his exclusive involvement with the psyche, has overlooked the potential of man’s physical-self and the world outside him". You say "The psyche experts have marked the fleshy character of man with its environment".

You are saying exactly opposite to the passage. In simple words passage indicates that psychologists ignored the physical self of man, while you are saying that "psyche experts" have related the physical self of man with his environment. Please try to understand the differences of points of view of various parties described in the passage.
By the way I never heard anything like "psyche experts".

3. You said "Civilization carved its roots on economic principles that include concepts of acute capitalism and cruel communism. Scientifically, man is dynamic but socially backward." What is meant by "acute capitalism" in this context? Also you said "man is dynamic" while the passage says that "Technologically, man is immensely powerful". Does dynamic means powerful in this context? Please use simple words and if substitute word is not coming to your mind then just use the word used in the passage.

4. You said "The future position of man relies on these pillars." Where in the passage this is said? Dont be stereotyped, say what the passage describes, not your own thoughts.

Regards