Thread: My Essay ! for 2010
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Old Sunday, November 22, 2009
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Bro,
from your essay i can feel that you are pretty hardworking but the basics do need something extra. Also the outline is a bit weakish i must say. Do correct ur grammer and a fair bit practise of essay writing.
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