@bunko mind blowing and excellent essay.i give 8.5/10

Salam Brother.ur written expression is very good.i wrote similar essay in 2009.i don't know what might be my marks but ur effort is light years ahead of mine.Please tell me from where are you preparing English also tell me if you are taking any english coaching classes

@junaid khan.

Ur comment was nice but you should also provide with your efforts for the forum memebers to scrutinise.it is easy to find errors with the work of others

Regards,

sikander

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