Dear Soomro Sahb,

It is really a good essay because not only it covers facts and figures but persuasive as well.
but dear don't mind, as far as my understanding is concerned, it is too small, while terrorism is vast topic and you have more to write on it.
Moreover, You did not mentioned regional contribution of terrorism in Pakistan, regional means our neighboring countries like India, Russia etc. Their influence in Pakistan is of big concern.
But dear still a good essay, Wishing you best of luck.

Regards,