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Originally Posted by rishzzz
thanx i will over it and try to make precis more reflective without illustrating examples.... but i thot it was quite special in this para to highlight their organized and systematic nature
you've got good grammer, style is impressive but aviod redundancy.
Precis was a compact one but it is shorter than requirement, count the lines of paragraph....
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well, I had attempted it in less than 20min so there are possibilities of errors and ommisions of many relevant ideas. I asked it from you, whether we have to put examples or not. because some times examples are becoming more important.
yes, you are right, my precis is shorter than the required one.
it was my second attempt, i have to work on it. thanks for identifying my redudancy in expression.