ty bro, you are probably right, I did mention the current scenario in what ever way I could relate with the whole body, I wanted to emphasize and narrate events over the whole history, since the topic didnt state anything to imply a contemporary approach, so I covered it through what ever history I could...it was very vast, and I had to finish it as well, otherwise I would just go on writing...had to wrap it up too, so did not go much into details, just basic arguments, since it was an argumentative essay and not a factual one so to speak.
and Ameen
