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Originally Posted by umarabbas
@saba
Dear...yours was a nice effort but, i am afraid, in the wrong direction. it would have been a marvelous effort if the essay was on title of terrorism and its implications or anything similar..
in your essay the word dialogue barely seems to come out in the limelight..
though i am not an authority and your effort was a pretty nice one...the reason i dropped it out was that it was vast, and i thought it would be attempted by many...:P
yeah i wanted to go for this topic in a cynical fashion.. i mean criticizing the society for its negligence of basic rights for men, women, chidren, elderly let alone the third gender....then found it too repungent :P
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you are absolutly right.
I thought I would come to the topic dialogue for combating terrorism after constructing a ground with proofs of failure to combat it with use of force, in doing so, i couldn't manage the time, and it took me to a never ending rout. though, i did it well to convince the assessor, but am not optimistic myself. so leave it, i learnt a lesson for next. still begging for 40 marks.....heheehe
regards
and best of luck.