welcome to the forum,and i appreciate your ideas.The thing i found lacking in your essay, is the usage of punctuations.You have repeated the same concepts,and did not exert law and justice impact as a whole.So you should work hard,keep continue your efforts,till you find yourself in the premises of recognized faces.
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" O ALLAH,let your blessings come upon Muhammad PBUH and the family of Muhammad PBUH, as you have blessed Ibrahim AS and his family.
Truly,you are praiseworthy and glorious.
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