Thanks for your comments.
The comments that you have given,some of these i had included in my essay.
I supported the view that women can be equal to men in pakistan.
I discussed the plight of women in Pakistan especialy in villages and tribal areas,their problems and threats faced by them like honour killing,domestic violence and problem of lack of education.
I mentioned examples from history of Islam and pakistan to remove the notion that women are inferior to men,i also gave examples of some of the brilliant ladies of Islam and Pakistan.
In my suggestions i quoted Quaid-i-Azam and examples of developed countries in the west,some verses and sayings of holy Prophet.
As far as giving more suggestions are concerned,these were that i could think of at that time.
My essay consisted of 18 pages including 2 pages of outline each page with estimately 150 words.
Now plz tell me how much marks you would give me in this essay.
Thanks