First be informed that i am not an expert and it is possible that my view may b wrong. I can give the following comments on your outline:
Only point 7 of your outline is relevant to the assigned topic. Can women b equal to men in pakistan? Yes or No. If Yes give your reasons. If No justify your argument. Though it is always better to give some background information, such info should never distract one from the main focus of the essay.
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