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Originally Posted by QAZ 1 View Post
@kawish

i have read your posts.your comments are terse and succinct.kindly tell me did you appear in CSS-2010?

i appeared in CSS-2010.

i wrote on "dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism"

my outline was

terrorism in contemporary world

avenues where conventional forces and strategies have been used

festering grounds of terrorism

palestine

kashmir

north korea

libya

pakistan

srilanka

mumbai attacks

dialogue as means to combat terrorism

dialogue can rob the terrorists of their political agenda

dialogue can embalm wounds of warring factions

it can expedite reconciliation and give an impetus to working out modalities for comprehensive talks

conclusion.

i wrote around 20 pages in very neat hand writing.so pretty sure about the English papers.

i have started preparation of interview.

please give me suggestions on my work-up so that other aspirants can also benefit from your prudent contribution.

i also exhort the contribution of worthy members of this prestigious forum.

regards,

Well, dear you had a good essay in paper, i must say, but few things if you would have added.....

Like you provided more of background and Country-or region-wise situational history then current scenario and the portion of current scenrio is a bit lacking
2ndly in ur outline, you didnt realy mention the Recommendations in required health and you jumped up directly to conclusion...

Your approach towards essay is good but you actually could'nt construct it in the way you wanted, i guess.....
I hope you will easily get out of th
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