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Originally Posted by asmapices
Man Is The Architect Of His Own Fortune...
A beautiful statement explains the topic as 'The fault is not in our stars,we are what we make ourselves to be'.....an architect designs his house according to his own wish,its totally his choice that how beautifully he accomplishes the task.whether he makes an ideal house which is praised by everyone or he designs an ordinary and common thingDont be that simple at the start that you are throwing an example kinda sentence by linking it the topic, your start should be indirect and well phrased).same is the case with human life.man can make his fortune the way he likes. its not necessary that a man borne to an elite class will remain rich throughout his life,yet it depends upon the way he treats his wealth.if he works honestly,and consistently his fate will remain with him.rather if he does not have strength ,he will surely lose all his wealth and honour.on the contrary an ordinary man can rise high in life by dint of hard work,honesty and consistency. as quoted by a great man 'Fortunate are those who learned the best way ti get is first to give through useful services'.people who blame their fate for being indifferent to them,indeed do not utilize their capabilities .there are no of examples in history that people having ordinary backgrounds ,enjoyed the peak of glory and got great powers i.e.Abrahan Lincoln son of a an ordinary person ,became a rulerIf you want to give an example, be a little at length while explaining it not just give a hint, even some examiners do appreciate a seaparate para for historical examples which have link with topic.if we want to make our fortune , first we should consider our capabilities,set a standard goal to achieve, and then should utilize our potentialities to their fullest extent because 'Effort only fully releases its reward after a person refuses to quit.'.no doubt fate is here but consistent efforts and devotion can alter it.
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