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Internet: A blessing or a bane
Advances in the fields of science and technology have turned the world into a global village.Communication has played a vital role in abridging gap between human populations.Internet being the most advanced form of communication has greatly influenced everyday life.In the fields of business, education and technology,internet is not less than a blessing. Human life is greatly eased by internet.Apart from facilitating human life, it has brought millions of people on a single platform, thus reducing distances.Its social influence is greater than its contribution in science and technology.Social contacts are enhancing, criminals are traced, information is disbursed, marriages are taking place, wars are fought and even treatment can be done from a distant place through this miraculous invention which is internet.However, this is one side of the picture.The other side in in complete contrast with the first one.Internet has transformed the social life of man into a mechanized form. Human beings have become mere machines of flesh and blood, where recognize each other through faces, and not though basic humanly qualities of emotions.By bringing civilizations together, internet has also contributed toward diffusion of evil and vice. It has become quite easy for people to deceive each other.Children are the worst effected lot, which are not only denied the right to play in open airs but are also made prone to countless social evils.Thus, internet is both a blessing and a bane.Its list of benefits does not fall behing its list of drawbacks.The answer to the aforementioned topic lies in the usage of internet.As an adage says "its not the gun but man behind the gun who fights", similarly its not the internet but the way it's used makes it a blessing or a bane.
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