Idea is good. try to use simple words, don't over react in writing english and use simple words. Most of the time, to prove ourselves we use such words those totally change the sense of a sentence and grammatical mistakes are done. e.g.

knocked on the doors : Knocked at!
other species seem : "Species" is not suitable word to use here.

rgds

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