Although I am late in asking for it but I request all seniors to please assess my essay outline and give me your valuable comments. I hope you would spare couple of minutes from THE busy hour :-)
Topic:Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management.
Outline:
1.Introduction
2.Overview of natural resources and mismanagement
3.Current scenario in Pakistan
4.Natural resources of Pakistan
- Water
- Natural gas
- Oil
- Coal
- Minerals
- Precious and ornamental stones
- Chemicals
5.Related problems due to mismanagement and its:
- Social effects
- Economic effects
- Political effects
- Transportation industry problems
- Industrial sector loss
- Effects on foreign relations of pakistan
6.Natural resources mismanagement at:
- Departmental level mismanagement
- WAPDA
- OGRA
- Minerals extraction departments
- Higher level mismanagement
- Lack of legislation
- Power politics
- Problem of regionalism
- Political influences
- Individual level
7.Suggestions for improvement
- Legislation for natural resource utilization
- Separate departments for policy making
- Media role in creating awareness
- Fixing problem of regionalism
- Privatization of departments
- Special accountability bureaus to be installed for natural resources
8.Analysis
9.Conclusion
Further my introduction paragraph starts like this:
"Life without conservation of natural resources would be like a deaf listening to music or a blind enjoying dance exhibition. Life of a modern man is directly or indirectly geared by natural resources in its various manifestations whether at consumer level, industry or means of transportation are concerned, no one can deny the fact that natural resources in its different manifestation are the ultimate driving force. Consumer using it to keep the pot boiling, industry needs it to maintain its production line while transport industry is using it to connect one end with other. As a result of this heavy dependence gave birth to the problem of resource management in itself and today a resource rich country lay exposed to the problems at social, economic, political fronts."
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Awaiting your kind response :-)