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Old Monday, November 01, 2010
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@Man in Blue

This is indeed very very good precis, I must say. I felt difficult to find any flaw in it.

However one suggestion (Although, it is just my thinking and you may differ). You said "It’s same like the feelings of Homen’s residents about sea as they think of it as a waste of land."

I would have written it something like "This is analogous to Homen's residents' thinking about sea, which they considered as wasted land."

At the same time I must tell you that you have written correctly. It is the sentence that came to my mind. (Consider it to be an alternative sentence).

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