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ap poet ki zindagi se tashreeh shuru ker saktay hain jesa k Ghalib k shaer ki ager tashreeh ki jaye tou kuch youn ho gi;
qarz ki peetay thay maey or samhtay thay k haan,
rang laye gi hamari faaqa masti aik din......!!

TASHREEH;
Ghalib ki sari zindagi mua'ashi tangdasti mein guzri.Musa'aib o aalaam se faraar k liye wo sharab noshi ka sahara letay thay
yani ap start len gay poet ki zindagi ka shaer k sath relation show ker k,ager ho tou...
phr tashreeh kernay k baad ap shaairi islahaat ka ziker karen gy ager koi istemal hui hon ya jo tarakeeb istemal hui hon..
aakhir mein thora sa ap ka zaati tabsara jesa k;
is shaer mein Ghalib apni bebasi ka mazaq urra rahay hain or ye un k kalaam ki khasoosiat hai k wo takaleef pe aansu bahanay ki bijaye shagufta mizaaji ka sahara laitay hain or ye e un ki infraadiyat hai...
rahi baat mafhoom ki tou wo mujhe b confirm nae,i hope koi or bata de ga.
ma'azrat k sath bhai,mei ne urdu pehlay attempt nae kia hua bcz ye meri pehli attempt ho gi Feb mein but i tried to help
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