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Old Thursday, December 02, 2010
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A candidate make following story from this title. It is his good effort.

Story Title
A table and three chairs in a room. 2 persons sit on chairs and one is raising his hand in air. A flask along with 3 cups were on table

Story:

Ahmed,Ali and omer are best friends. They are bright students of their college and always participated in extracurricular activities.The district is organizing a bait-bazi competition and they decided to participate on behalf of their college. They divided famous poets like Iqbal, Faiz, Qateel shafai,Ghalib etc among each other and memorizing their ishaars. In free time, they go to common room and practice for competition. For good practice, they start bait-bazi and give tough time to each other. in the given picture, Omer is reading the beautiful shair of Allama Iqbal "khudii ko kar buland itna" and he became emotional and raised his hands in air.
hence our young generation must read the Iqbal's poetry to wake their eager spirit and to understand the concept of self reliance.


Correction

excellent solution dear.

bright, extra-curricular, r suitable words.

khudi ko kar buland itna, concept of self reliance; these sentences show healthy expressions.

u write "he became emotional" it is not correct.

u should write in this way;
"he became excited and raised his hand"

Try to use proper and simple words.

Moreover u can write ur merits in character of any person; e,g;

Ahmad, Ali and umer r very efficient, obedient, passionate and cofident .
They r very social........................................
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