I m grateful for your response, it was helpful confidence booster.

Your sketch is themed on your own comprehension and it is inscribed in your own words, however mine is themed on the original passage wherein I have tried to trim down the extraneous matter while following the original logical sequencing, as well as lingo, of the original para. Which, you think, is the better approach in resolving this problem???

So far titling is concerned, I postulated it from the first line of the paragraph, but in overall context, it seems your title is more suitable.

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The precondition for existence of a higher humanity is not the state, but the nation possessing the necessary ability.