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Originally Posted by Spotless Mind
Envy, the worst trait of human nature kindly review it again, it is a lot more intensifying
Envy is the worst trait of human nature. An envious person wishes bad luck to others and cannot avoid unhappiness. Such people ruin their happiness by desiring more(Make a single sentence by joining these both). An envious person tries to stop others from the benefit of what they have(Use abstract words rather tries to stop). But he himself desires the same benefits. Why doctors have more facilities than the laborers? The same phenomenon happens in other fields.(Btter if you dont really put examples in it) Admiration is the cure of envy, admiration with the good look for others overcomes envy. Envy can also be overcome through happiness but unfortunately envy is hindrance to happiness. To the envious person happiness is meaningless. Envy can be cured if it causes are found.
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I have attempted it in 2010 so i do remember it what is in original passage, you surpassed the later part of passage in which examples of saints have been given, you must quote their lighter reference in such a way that you dont luk incorporating example of saints in concerned passage.
You did well, avoid using the language in the original text. Try your own.