brother

ur essay should revolve arround word ''future''.
concise the definition,genesis and past to one paragraph each thats it.focus on future like it would fail,destruction,glory whatever comes into ur mind. Please donot deviate, these old fellows who check the essay are very strict.
ur language is fine.

and plz don't follow the newspaper language. u r not an independent writer.don't blame musharraf or ISI or anyone else. if checker happens to be a retire army general or cousin of musharraf or pro musharraf , consider what could happen.