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Originally Posted by mani1
Would appreciate comments and critique on my outline!!
I wrote 2200 words on
What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?
My Outline was
INTRODUCTION
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states
HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11
External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971
Nuclear Explosions 1998
MAIN CAUSES
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid
REMEDIAL MEASURES
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish
CONCLUSION
Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages
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let me congratulate you. you are through in this paper atleast inshallah (if no grammatical/spelling mistakes are there). one of the few essay caring to give an introduction to the topic (which ofcourse is very very important). Work hard on other papers especially EDS which is very scoring.