please comment on my outline. i hv written about 3800 words with quotes poetry and references. the major point was in order to see the status of pakistani women in relation to if she is an angel in the house or source of all evils we must look into the factors affecting pakistani society.

I actually took an investigative approach to the topic rather than jumping on the conclusion.

Introduction

Women
Women overall in the whole world
Gender discrimination
- Global Problem
- Seoul Summit 2010
- Against Human Rights
Women in Pakistan

Main Body:
Women in Pakistan --- Source of evil or Angel of house?

Religious Aspects:
Pakistan predominantly an Islamic state
Other religions in Pakistan i.e. Christianity, Hinduism, Buddhism etc
Status of women in Islam
Status of women in other religions
Christianity
Hinduism
Buddhism and Jainism
Social Aspect:
Role of women in Pakistan as Mother
Role of women in Pakistan as Daughter
Discriminatory
Role of women in Pakistan as Sister
Discriminatory
Marriage to Holy Quran in some areas of Sindh
Role of women in Pakistan as Wife
Discrimination
Domestic Violence
Family as an agent of socialization
Role varies across the social strata’s
Women are preferred to stay at home

Cultural Aspect
Pakistani culture different from Arabic Culture
Pakistani culture affected by Hindu Culture
Women status is Hindu culture thus impacts her status in Pakistan as well

Political Aspect
Discrimination on the basis of gender with few exceptions

Literature and Arts
Women are not encouraged
Male dominancy
Other problems are Governmental response
Women trafficking
Protection of women against sexual harassment at workplace act 2009
Separate ministry for women

Privileges enjoyed by Women in Pakistan
Suffrage since inception
10% quota in central superior services
Reserved seats in National assembly
Acheivements of women
Benazir Bhutto
Nusrat Bhutto
Fehmida Mirza
Women in private sector
Conclusion:
Age of enlightenment
Women are not at all frail
Acceptance of women at home and outside home –in process
Status of Women in Pakistani society is better than that of women in other Islamic states
Silver lining in the dark cloud

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