Originally Posted by umarabbas

First of all. It's an awesome attempt. one of the best attempts i must say. but since nothing is perfect, there is one flaw that i can identify (i am no expert, but as a thumb of rule i always stress on it). the title was:

"Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by the print and electronic media"

The pillars are truth and freedom. Mashallah you have described everything in a flow. touched every important aspect of the topic. however where was teh freedom aspect????? i dont know if you included it in your introduction. you should have. i see it in the conclusion part, which otherwise should have been right at the top. you could have started with discussing the independence of media and then coming to the truth aspect. Thumbs up. you will do great inshallah (my gut feeling)~ work on other papers. it's the first power play. many more to go and they are equally important