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Outline:
Introduction
-Disasters
-Disaster management
-Govt's objective to provide secuirty to its citizens
-Pakistan's location vulnerable to natural disasters
Types of Disaster
Natural disasters
-Floods
-Earthquakes
-Cyclones, storms etc
Human origin disaster
-Fire
-structural collapses
Constituents/Components of disaster management system
-Human component
-Tangible component( equipment/machinery)
-Coordination/information systems
Stages of disaster management
-Prevention(before)
-Mitigation(during)
-Rehabilitation( after)
Recent major disaster in Pakistan and their handling by our government
-Earth quake
-Floods
-Fires in major cities
-handling of IDP's due to terrosism and military operation
Analysis of the over all disaster management abilities of our government machinery till date, proving them as inefficient in this area.
Recommendation
-Strong, envisioned, and empowered disaster management authority
-Disaster management to be allocated sufficient budget
-Development of a national policy
-Development of water reservoirs to
-development of building structures on modern lines to cope with earthquakes
-Replacement of obsolete machinery with authorities involved in it
-Utilization of emergency information systems
-Deployment of disaster management force upto distrcit level
-Training of the whole nation to better carry out relief activities.
Conclusion
I had my outline on 2.5 pages, and my essay was on next 22 pages. But i right in a larger font. On average i write about 110-115 words per page, so my essay without the outline would be approximately 2200-2400 words.
In 2010, i had written about the same and i scored 45 marks in essay.
I have not used much of figures in my essay. One can never be sure about essay, but i am very hopeful. Please pray for my success. Essay ho jai, InshAllah the rest i will get through in.
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