It seems well-organized.
In my opinion, which may be wrong, word delicious is used for something which we can taste. "vital" or "essential" are more suitable words as compared to delicious.
secondly, panacea-a remedy for all diseases, is a single word. you wrote " one of the finest panacea" so it dreates vague impression
on the whole your thoughts are valid and pose good impression.
Last edited by marwatone; Tuesday, May 24, 2011 at 03:25 PM.
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