roshan you wrote about education is the best weapon.it is a good topic and your effort for this topic cannot be underestimated.your ideas are good but as senior member said that it is a close topic and you just can write on this topic.you also can add about the present scenario of education in developed countries and how they became developed countries.you also can add about the KEI WHICH IS CALLED KNOWLEDGE ECONOMY INDEX and it rates that which country developed its economy through education and Pakistan is far behind in this index in comparison to south Asian countries.well as you wrote about the education system in Pakistan there is no denying the fact that if you focused on Pakistan to some extent.of course it is necessary.and you need not to worry as continuous practice will make you expert in writing so keep it up.
ub hawaien he krain ge roshni ka faisla
jin dioun main jan ho ge woh diay reh jaen gay
so be courageous

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