Thread: Essay On Food Crisis/Food Insecurity (Plz Check & Comment)
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Old Saturday, July 09, 2011
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Originally Posted by Roshan wadhwani View Post
dear memebers plz check my essay and guide me by giving ur useful suggestions...thnkng in advance
Sir, introduction of your essay is unnecessarily elongated. Besides, it does not address the topic directly. Therefore, I put my humble suggestion of rewriting this introduction. Your efforts are plausible. Good job. Take care.
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