Thread: Essay on socio-economic problems of pakistan(plz check and comment)
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Old Tuesday, August 09, 2011
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bravo...u used relevant material and good vacab..over all it touches passing marks boundaries...but there r some mistakes regarding tenses e g in first paragraph..some sentenses hav lose structure e g 2nd p g..quaid e azam.......make pretty out lines like suicidal poverty etc
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