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Originally Posted by qamar abbas ranjha
bravo...u used relevant material and good vacab..over all it touches passing marks boundaries...but there r some mistakes regarding tenses e g in first paragraph..some sentenses hav lose structure e g 2nd p g..quaid e azam.......make pretty out lines like suicidal poverty etc
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Thanx for ur appreciation sir.......i'll be grateful to u if u point out mistakes in detail so as i cud improve my weaknesses in future..Waiting for positive response....Regards