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Introduction:
Definition
Civilization and women
Women in Islam and current scenario
Globally analysis of women current scenario
Problems Faced by women
Main Factors
(i)Physical strength and sense of superiority of man
(ii)so called religious scholars
(iii)Feudalistic and socialistic system of the government
Women Hudood ordinance1979
Patriarchal behaviour of man
Anti-women practice bill
Damage done and Repair undertaken
Women's protection act amends the ordinance to ensure justice
Recommendations for the empowerment of women
(i)Economic Empowerment
(ii)Legal Support
(iii)Political Support
Worth of legislation as against social moor, customs and prejudices
Conclusion