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Old Tuesday, December 12, 2006
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@ Nosheen

You have done good solid analysis in essay. Usage of long sentences proves your intelligence as well... but keep in mind that usage of long sentences may be risky from exam point of view. Secondly long sentences require appropriate use of punctuations. You have ignored this aspect in this essay. On the whole, it's good admirable effort. Thanks for sharing.

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