@ Samra Kanwal:

Well, this essay is plagiarized like a few members have already remarked on the same. I've a few ideas to share with you, hoping to come in handy for your friend...
The best way to compose a good essay is to search for its information from the specified source and incorporate it into your own writing style... If the source is not specified, you can take recourse to different sources like internet using the major search engines, books, articles, opinions, forums, and newspapers etc. Outlining the major relevant facts is a fantastic idea as it helps a great deal collect only what you require without wasting your time... Once you have collected the information, try to improvise it into your own words... To make the writing process please you instead of being boring or tiresome, develop the habit of putting down everything to paper. The great writers believe that everything in life needs to be written as a source of fun... Remember, essay literally means an "attempt", so avoid any kind of plagiarism...

The views of some writers from a community of freelance writers:

1.If research is conducted thoroughly and a good understanding of the subject is achieved, there should be no need for plagiarism.
Kate , USA

2. Basically, it's deplorable. If you can't communicate in your own words, find something else to do. If you want to collect other people's words, be honest and say that's what you're doing.
Steve , USA

3. In my opinion, plagiarism is akin to theft as passing somebody else's work off as your own is, in-effect, stealing another's property. It is therefore essential that all citations are clearly referenced according to an established style guide. Intentional plagiarism should not be tolerated.
Rebecca , UK

4. It is a serious crime which is punishable by law. Plagiarism should be avoided at all costs and thus original work should be presented.
Wasif , USA

5. I believe that one can get plenty of ideas and information from reading multiple sources, and it would be incorrect for one to steal any body else's ideas and supplement them as their own. Plagiarizing work that is not ones own is an indication that one lacks the skill or confidence to put their own ideas forward.
Pearl , Denmark


Hope it helps...

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