Originally Posted by Ainuddin Kibzai

Miss.
to be a strict and straight-forward, I must not keep you in the dark and clearly let you know that there are many deficiencies in your written expression.
There are grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes, improper use of irrelevant vocabulary, and your inability to express what you want to say.
You need to WORK quite SERIOUSLY on your expression in all the perspectives mentioned above.
I would have done injustice to you had I remained soft towards this very topic of yours.
Regards,
Ainuddin Kibzai.