I typed a review but the site asked me to refresh before posting quick reply. When i did that ,the typed message disappeared so i couldn,t help,anyways there r some grammatical errors as train instead of trains, error of tense in the subsequent clause and deviation from original in the concluding sentense. overall right approach
Last edited by qamar83; Monday, December 26, 2011 at 10:53 PM.
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