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Originally Posted by marilatif
if this essay is really written by you then u dont need any improvement. simply superb. just go and sit in the exam, u are going to top it. but i seriously doubt that it is written by u.
pardon me if i am wrong.
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Oh! Thanks a lot My Highness for great remarks and appreciation.
I need bachelor degree to sit in CSS exams as i am in intermediate.
I assure you it's written by me. I want to show you poem of mine which resembles with this.
Here it is:
WOMEN IN GRAVEYARD
Limited till ceiling, caged in four walls,
No. no! Don’t fire and she there falls
Women are practiced as sole of shoe,
Oh! Man, listen to her cries and calls.
Oh! Just for sake of honour,
Girls beheaded, thrown in corner.
Separated are the agreed hearts,
Born daughters and killed sooner.
Curse of dowry kills brides,
Bereaved of deserving rights,
O! Buried, in buried graveyard!
Women sold in darkness of nights.
Eyes which ever dared,
Blinded, no one cared.
And those who love here,
Fired, they are being fired.
Being sinless blamed & defamed,
Injured, punished and damned.
Justice is in which direction?
They were killed who claimed.
No justice, women ever enslave,
Shroud- less women’s will engrave.
Wings of free will are broken,
Shattered dreams are save.
Chocked by father, brother & husband,
Banned for ever and they are chained.
Women are used as patrimony.
Tired eyes rained, hunted hearts pained.
Extinguished candles of desires & hopes,
Dreams are buried like nameless corpse.
Oh! Women, fight for your rights,
Still in your eyes ceased drops.
Xuhaib Ahmed THE TRAVELLER
Thanks a lot and keep on guiding me. =)