thanks a lot for your detailed analysis.this is my first effort to right a full essay.usually i just made outline and then left it.
I am glad to have your suggestion for improving my writing.
I really appreciate all sorts of positive criticism.
Because of far from my country,I only have access to this forum for CSS study.

dear
regarding religion,so far my research have proved to me,religion is more emphasis by all over the world once again.if you open up to the western new trends then you can easily feel the difference of yesterday west trend v/s today's trend.