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Originally Posted by humayun "The King"
Peoples are now own glaziers and electricians as it was opposite in past. Low wages before war compelled peoples call artisans for work and in war day’s housemaster have to do by him because of non availability. Limited availability, more profitable work at factories, and high wages of remaining now instead of paying these, now people enjoy doing work and that resulted in flourish of do-it-yourself tools. From hardware stores and bookshops peoples can buy these tools and their manual. Now because of demand, interest and more smartness in making news items along with repair these do it yourself kits are easily available. (104)
Title:From paid work to selfdone work.
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Title: From paid work to self done.
People are now own glaziers and electricians as it was opposite in past. Low wages before war compelled them to call artisans for work. During war day’s artisans were in armed forces so they have to do mend by themselves so it became a habit of them. After war workers joined factories that were more profitable, and remaining raised their wages. Rather paying them high people started a campaign of self done. With advancement allied books and tool kits with their manual are available that helped people to train themselves and they learnt not only to mend but to make new as well. (103)
Brother this time you were not up to the mark, you just check out the corrections I have made in it. Your precis was showing that you have just tried to finish it without considering the quality of work. your initial efforts were really good but sorry to say it was lagging behind in so many respects. So plz next time make it carefully.
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