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Correct the following? seniours

A ten feet long snake made people run here and there
We are going to the concert, and so they are.
Enclosed with this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his request to our main office.
Fear from God.
Pakistan has and will support the Kashmiris.
He has come yesterday.
Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else than pride.
Do not avoid to consult a doctor.
Although these sentences are always tricky but here goes my opinion.

A ten feet long snake made people run here and there.
A ten feet long snake made people to run here and there.

We are going to the concert, and so they are.
We are going to the concert, and so are they.

Enclosed with this letter was a signed Affidavit and a carbon copy of his request to our main office.
Enclosed with this letter was a signed Affidavit alongwith a carbon copy of his request to our main office. [I am not really sure about it]

Fear from God.
Fear God.

Pakistan has and will support the Kashmiris.
Pakistan has and will continue to support the Kashmiris.
To others more plausible version is: Pakistan has supported and will support the Kashmiris.

He has come yesterday.
He came yesterday.

Arshad's down fall was due to nothing else than pride.
Arshad's down fall was due to pride

Do not avoid to consult a doctor.
Do not avoid a doctor.
Do not avoid a doctor's consultation.
Consult a doctor.
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