you wrote very well.I also wrote almost the same.I also cited examples from history especially how tyranny and oppression of Popes drove people away from religion in Europe.I wrote that atheism or disbelief in God has is deeply rooted in the immorality of clergy.I did not forget to write that ignorance of mullahs have caused sectarianism in Islam too.

Lets see what would be the reward.
Hope for the best.