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Old Tuesday, March 27, 2012
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@ wasim soomro

Bro I suggest you to go to an authentic English expert .. You have some serious grammar mistakes in your essay and if you don't address the issue through a competent English teacher, it may cause your downfall in both English papers .. However, as of now below are some points you need to take into account while writing essays:

1- Do not use headings
2- Avoid definitions and address the statement in question properly in your introduction .. You do not need to provide full background to the topic, rather you need to address what has been asked ..
3- Practice constantly and get your essay checked by a good English teacher .. Work hard on grammar and the art of producing concepts with clarity ..

Do not panic .. Just work hard and get your English checked by a good English teacher .. You'll be O.K InshaAllah

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