Monday, April 30, 2012
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Quote:
Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed
Quite Well!~ Here, comes "NO ONE"
Call me! Call me! Call me NO ONE,
If I be slain, say! “Gone is NO ONE.”
Inwardly I reach the fringe of existence,
And I become nothing in my presence,
When I will be shot with death’s gun,
Then, laugh with fun; say “Gone is NO ONE.”
This world, when I ever peep,
Feelings flame, then! I weep,
When I will be burnt like blazing sun,
Take my ashes and run; say, “Fired is NO ONE.”
Look! This air in lost cradle,
In grave beheaded face as fallen apple.
In my cradle and grave will be none,
Go in my prison; say, “liberated is NO ONE.”
Let me dive like drop in ocean,
Find me, for you is the fiction,
When I will be lost in any direction!
Men, this is last option; say, “lost is NO ONE.”
Physical hands are cut, but real?
With blood is the love’s appeal,
You cut my physical feet, cut spiritual,
I look with inner eyes my loved one; say,
“Martyred is NO ONE.” |
I must say you are born poet or like wise .your style has aggression and music making your poem classical. write and keep the spirit up .you are able to bring a change
spirituality ...wow last line is awesome .spirituality can`t be cut .ibn-e-temia ke bary me you`ve read??
when his pen was taken ,he was died .
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