Friday, July 06, 2012
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40th CTP (DMG)
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I have corrected some mistakes and suggested some amendments. You have done a nice effort but you further need to work on your sentence structure. Try to make simple and short sentences. Also take care of small/capital alphabets.
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Originally Posted by madeeha gondal
Having an experience of a lot of different things is what makes one's life interesting. Everything in the world is beholding diversity, from nature to man made things. When God created the universe, He was very much sure about His creation, and the nature of His man he created man with different features, abilities and nature.
(The bold sentence doesn't make much sense. GOD doesn't actually need surety of things because HE is all-knowing.)
Man likes variety in every aspect of life like food clothes, homes and traditions, in every way he wants to be look different from others. Food without variety is not digestible that is why man denied man-o-salwa because there was no combo or change in it. Today we see every other nation has its own immense variety of foods.
Our textile and fashion industries are one of the great examples of it. This human instinct is good and healthy because it arouses the sense of competition and innovation. In drinks, man does not like monotonous kind of tea. There are more than hundred types of tea along with thousands of food items. When we look around we have thousands of traditional values and norms and every tradition beholds its own beauty and charm.
In short, variety is a spice of life that gives all its flavors.This is a fundamental truth of human nature that man cannot hold on,on one single thing, his curiosity arouses for an other thing after getting one. Keats very beautifully defines the nature of humankind in a poetic way "heard melodies are sweet but those unheard are sweeter."
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