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Originally Posted by Farrukh Aziz View Post
Where there is a will there is a way
The hidden idea that lies in the above proverb should be obvious to those whose way is full of hurdles and obstacles that in the midst of rainy days and troublesome days, there are gala days too.The difficulties and problems in one's path should not be the source of dejection,despair and lethargy.If this winter comes, spring cannot be far behing.If difficulties hinder one's way, one should know once for all that behind these there is a way waiting for one.One can easily reach one's targeted way on the condition that one has got an iron will.If one's determination,one's one's will and one's goals are constant not changeable then I think there is no-one who can ever dare to prevent one from reaching one's destination.

For instance: a person is willing to do CSS but he thinks that he cannot qualify it.It is a very difficult exam as it comprises 12 subjects .In short, he lacks courage and is double-minded and afraid of the difficulties that might raise their heads during his preparation.Consequently, he loses all his hopes and becomes hopeless and lethargic.This is what we call lack of strong determination.In place of being hopeless,he needs to think if he has his ambition ,way itself will automatically knock at his door.

All those people whose names are shiningly prominent in the history, did not retreat from their targeted destination and they did not lose their hopes and desires to achieve their certain goal just because of so-called ups and downs.They were well aware of the fact that ups and downs are a part of human life.They can not be neglected because they are like a shadow chasing us.Likewise, we should not be scared of problems. However hard, tortuous and difficult they may be,we should show them that we are strong and persistent.And at all events,we have to achieve what is before our eyes and what we have targeted or desired.

You could have quoted examples of Che, Mandela, Lenin, Thomson, Mao, Buddha, Newton, Albert and so on.

First Para speaks more about difficulties, You had better speak about will, determination and decisive approach.

Try to stay at one idea in one Para.

Overall quite well, it is
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