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Old Sunday, July 15, 2012
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Originally Posted by fiza mehar View Post
God helps those who help themselves

God only helps those people who work hard and make an honest effort and helps those who try their level best to achieve anything.Everything is possible in the world if one TRIES to get it with great determination and true struggle, not DEPENDS only on day dreaming, also BELIEVES in hard work .By hard working one can convert his day dreaming, plans into reality.

After the war of independence 1857,the condition of Muslims BECAME so WORSE that they (WERE ) unable to do anything for themselves AND for their religion Islam, At that time great people like Sir syed Ahmeb khan and Allama Muhammad Iqbal gave new direction to MUSLIMS through which they could change their lifestyle. The message of these leaders was “Khodi” and constant struggle for MUSLIMS' rights and it was only possible through education. Result of their efforts lead them towards the division of Subcontinent and finally Muslims succeeded to get their homeland Pakistan.

Everything is possible through hard work and constant effort and if the determination is true God also HELPS the man in getting success and converting dreams into reality .

Some grammatical errors are coloured. Learn tenses and sentence structure.

Try to write more, you need to work on your expressions.

The message of these leaders was “Khodi” It is not related towards the Topic.

Try to write simple sentences, do not make complex sentences.

You could have quoted some quotations and verses. Indeed, these beautify expressions.

In 2nd Para, you had to show how Muslims struggled and how they were helped by God.

Overall Good efforts. Keep posting more expansions.
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