@ zuhaib ahmed
thanks for such detailed response to telling me my mistakes.
i shall try to improve but i followed the pattern of my esteemed teacher Sir Kashif. That was like first 2 lines of essay/expansion are starters whereas 3rd line is your theme line.theme line depicts one's overall stance in essay. So i followed that.
i emphasized on "hero" word because i perceived it that topic contains 2 key words i.e hero & tragedy. so i took it like being in shoes of hero is not a plum job & tried o explain it that way...!!
i am explaining because this may give you further glimpse of the extent of my understanding of topic.thus you may further guide me for better.
Regards