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Old Sunday, July 22, 2012
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Originally Posted by pearlyS View Post
Prosperity Make Friends,Adversity Tries Them

It is an undeniable fact that when a man steps up the ladder of success & acquires a lavish life-style,people start befriending him to channel his fortunes for their own good.However,such people with selfish aims are only to stay with him in his heydays not the otherwise. When providence turns the page & that same man faces adversity,he gets the chance to recognize the real face of his so called friends. Though purple-patch of one's life keeps coming & going but this very movement is enough to test who stands beside the loser and who abandons him.
It is a common observation that everyone wants to develop contact with the one who has some clout to influence & manipulate or simply have an enviable socio-economic status.People show great enthusiasm in befriending those who could be future assistance in any form or any way. This is the pull factor that often draws selfish people.Albeit it is strange that when a person goes through hardships,he weeps alone.Nowhere he finds those cronies around who,during his smooth-sailing,never missed a chance to ensure him of their loyalty.
Adversities like a magnifying glass reveal the true substance of one's best friend(s).Adversities teach her victim who to befriend & trust though in a hard way.



please evaluate,mark & guide!!

Quite well! Good use of vocabulary.

You could give good examples.

Overall, more than 10 for this one.

And, Did you read expansion of mine on yesterday's topic, CALL NO MAN..........?
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