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Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ
@ zuhaib and usman ,
thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,...
Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that.
@last para
i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''
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Thanks.
I am waiting for next one.
Dear, Usman Khalid.
The very two sentences are interconnected.
The one who aims high, gets destined heaven. It seems as if life has choosen them in order to examine what they can do .
The subjects should be either in singular or plural.
First sentences carries singular subject and 2nd one plural. So, it creates confusion.