dear sir this is my first attempt of expansion.can u please evaluate it and guide me further....pls

A Fool may learn a wise man wit
fool and wise are two extremes of human mental abilities.fool person is the one who make minimum use of analytic abilities, mis percieve and misunderstand things. in fact, he consider himself the most wise person on the earth.while on the other hand wise man look at things in wider perspective calmly,make wise decisions and respect the opinion of others.
in reality every individual is a fool at some stage of his life.e.g in childhood,innocent babies use to fight over sweets ask foolish questions from parents and then later they laugh at their cheerful foolish memories.
similarly a teacher at start of his career might get aggressive and angry at questions and behavior of his students but after experiences ad learning from seniors he became the one who prepares nations.
But in entire journey of becoming wise person from fool,one should be open minded,flexible and whole heartily accept his mistakes and learn from them. similarly by listening to senior and experienced one can easily cover up his mistake and take wise decisions.finally being Muslim it is our duty to follow our Holy Prophet(P.B.U.H) so that we can become a wise and true Muslim.